Wednesday, 29 May 2013

Writing to Persuade

"I think that you have to eat healthy food because you might get fat."


  1. Awesome Writing Ava! Yes it is true if you eat to much junk food you get fat! Do you know what calories are? If you don't send me a message on my blog and I will tell you what they are. What have you been learning lately? I have seen you playing in the play ground with all your friends it's so cool seeing you have a great time. Heading back to your writing, I love the picture of the cup cake with that nice looking berry on the top! What is your favorite food and what is your favorite color? My favorite color used to be Pink { that was when I was little.} My favorite color now is Blue. Please, Please, Please put some more posts on your blog cause I love looking at all your learning! Keep up the GREAT work!
    Bye see you at next buddy time.
    From Hannah. PS: You get to my blog by typing in the ins and outs then scroll down the page and on the right hand side you will see blog pole click on the name "Hannah" and as soon as you click on it will come up as my blog. Please leave me a comment!

  2. Hi Ava, Thank you for bring my buddy!